Baby Girl

August 7, 2010 at 3:04 PM (Poetry)

Your smile

Forever imprinted in

My heart

Tears fall, memories

Slipping down my cheeks

Why do I push you?

Love, wake me




  1. Luke Prater said,

    Nice one



  2. dustus said,

    Very emotional in few lines. Nice job!

  3. fiveloaf said,

    this to me is cute!

    • Amaya'sLove said,

      I’m glad you can interpret it positively 🙂 Thanks for reading

  4. Talon said,

    Awww, this was so heartbreaking!

    • Amaya'sLove said,

      It was heartbreaking to write, but I hope you liked it anyway

  5. Jingle said,

    Thanks for sharing!

    • Amaya'sLove said,

      I’m happy to share! Thank you for putting these poetry sites together

  6. Jingle said,

    super fabulous!
    love the flow..

  7. buttercup600 said,

    I liked it, tears fall, memories slipping down my cheeks…awesome word flow!! Thanks for linking with Potluck, appreciate your support so much xxx

    • Amaya'sLove said,

      I’m enjoying potluck, a lot 🙂 Thank you for the compliments

  8. splashofexpression said,

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