Goodbye..

September 19, 2010 at 12:35 AM (Poetry)


Take that beat, place it

near my memory

Never let it stop,

hear it in my dreams

Remember my face

and know I want you

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7 Comments

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  2. Jingle said,

  3. Kavita said,

    There was no mistaking the intensity of the sentiment here…. TOO GOOD!!! Felt it myself!!!

    Thank you for linking this powerful poem with poetry potluck…

  4. Jingle said,

    aptly done,

    love the precision and rhythms in it.
    Happy Tuesday!

  5. dustus said,

    Very clear the intentions in the poem, and the beat set seems like it could be the continuation of a heartbeat. Nicely done

    • Amaya'sLove said,

      Wow! I actually have written a poem called HeartBeat that is very much like a prologue to Goodbye

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