So numb, So

September 24, 2010 at 7:28 PM (Poetry)


cold, my jaw trembles

your patient, warm hands

pressing against my cheeks, waist, neck

the tears fall, instantly staining you

mi corazon es tuyo

por siempre

awakening to a nightmare

never turn back

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9 Comments

  1. Jingle said,

    Please help giving (belated) birthday wishes to 3 or 4 fellow poets:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/happy-birthday-eric-dom/

    Thanks a lot for the support.
    Happy November!
    Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!
    xxx

  2. Jingle said,

    thanks for sharing.
    hope you well.

  3. fiveloaf said,

    whatever it is you wrote on the 6th and 7th line is redundant of the fact that you love to write.. good job!

    • Amaya'sLove said,

      Thank you
      the spanish translates into ‘My heart is yours forever’

  4. Jessicas Japes said,

    Beautiful, I really enjoyed this poem!

  5. marousia said,

    Well shaped poem

  6. Kimberly's Page said,

    You painted a great picture.

  7. Jingle said,

    I feel the shivers…

    well put.

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