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September 26, 2010 at 10:16 AM (Poetry)


Teal sky, swirling dancing save me

cold looms up, hits my heart

release me from my trembling, purgatory

crying swooning, numbing sense

hopelessness, deep and purple

black vivid light, overwhelms

release me from my trembling, purgatory

aching, sharp stings torture

blue pinpricks, melting into teal

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9 Comments

  1. Jingle said,

  2. Talon said,

    The colors add such sad and dark elements to this touching poem.

  3. sillyfrogsusan said,

    Really love the way you began and ended this passionate poem with the same word!

  4. buttercup600 said,

    Loved the imagery in this…thanks so much for linking with Potluck!! Hugs x

  5. Jingle said,

    a poem that is packed with emotions and light…
    thanks for sharing.
    love it.

  6. swallowyourwordslikeaplacebo said,

    I ADORE the color comparisons in this one n_n<3

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