A mi Amore

September 29, 2010 at 7:49 PM (Poetry)


 

Me quedaré con mi corazón
Marchitándome para siempre
El amor morirá
Ayúdame

 

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6 Comments

  1. Pablo said,

    It is amazing how a poem can be interpreted in so many different ways. And I say this because, while trying to translate this to spanish, I was faced with several options of words to use, each of which would completely change the meaning of the poem. Anyway, this might not be what you wanted to say (for that I apologize) and, again, I am not good at writing poems, but my interpretation goes something like this:

    Me quedaré con mi corazón
    Marchitándome para siempre
    El amor morirá
    Ayúdame

    • Amaya'sLove said,

      It sounds beautiful. Thank you, I will definitely edit this.

      It IS amazing. That’s really what I love about writing and reading poetry. There’s really no Set way to understand a poem. It’s uncharted territory, whatever you want to say, goes.

  2. Unknown said,

    At least once a week I check your blog to see if you have posted anything new. I Love your poems. I got shivers when I read “mi corazon es tuyo” in “So numb, So” (spanish is my first language), but you still need to work in your spanish. Keep the good work.

    • Amaya'sLove said,

      Wow, I didn’t know I had dedicated readers, thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed the other poem. I’m sorry about the mistakes, I’m still in the process of learning Spanish and I honestly got a few words from a translator 🙂

      • Pablo (previously unknown) said,

        Well, I’ve been following your blog since June 29 (I actually posted a comment that day saying I couldn’t believe you were only 14) and I am glad I found it. I love the “goth” feel of your poems. It helps me out when I’m kinda down.
        As for your spanish, I am not good at writing poems (wish I was), but if you want you can tell me what it is you are trying to say in english and I can help you with the translation.

      • Amaya'sLove said,

        I remember that! How wonderful, I’m so glad you like my blog. The poetry really helps me when I’m not feeling too well also. Your comment actually really helps too 🙂 I don’t have the simple words I started with in English anymore, but I think it was something along the lines of
        Stay with my heart
        Wilt(ing) forever
        Love will die
        Help me

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